Thursday, 29 December 2016

Detailed Textual Storyboard Planning


For our convenience, we've taken the seconds into account to form somewhat a timeline. We've divided the lyrics according to each clip we'll be shooting; how and where. So here is our Detailed Planning for Our Music Video.

Clip 1

No lyrics

Sitting in a dark room
door opens> natural light on half her face> disclose location.
Mid-close up.

Duration: 00.00-00.17
Location:
Clip 2


I was listening to the ocean

Side profile of the girl.




Duration: 00.17-00.21
Location: Rawal Lake
Clip 3


No lyrics

Extend the previous shot, panning to the next shot.




Duration: 00.31-00.33
Clip4


"I had a dream I was seven"

Spin around to a different location.



Duration: 00.34-00.37
Location: Rawal Lake
Clip 5

"Climbing my way through the tree.."

The child climbing the tree is shown. Long shot.


Duration: 00.38-00.40
Location: F-9 Park
Clip 6

"I saw a piece of heaven
Waiting, impatient, for me"

The perspective of the child is shown. (Point of view shot)

Duration: 00.41- 00.47
Location: F-9 Park
Clip 7

No lyrics


Merge clip 6-8



Duration: 00.48- 00.50
Location:
Clip 8

"And I was running far away
Would I run off the world someday?"

The girl runs out through the trees.

Duration: 00.51- 00.54
Location: SaidpurVillage
Clip 9

Nobody knows, nobody knows

Tracking of the subject which is the girl: who's looking around as if in a search of the known. Different perspectives of her looking around. (Mid close shot)

Duration: 00.55- 00.58
Location: Shah Allah Ditta
Clip 10

And I was dancing in the rain TILL where I belong

The younger version is dancing in the rain. (aerial view < mid shot <  long shot) The girl's twirling..
Duration: 00.59-01.09
Location: Shah Allah Ditta
Clip 11

I can't take it anymore

Continuation of the previous shot, transition of the versions. Present version falls on her knees. (Shift to close up)
Duration: 01.10 - 01.13
Location: Shah Allah Ditta
Clip 12
No lyrics


Complete the previous idea.





Duration: 01.13 - 01.15
Location:
Clip 13


"I was painting a picture"


The side profile of the present version dipping her fingers in the water. Wide shot.

Duration: 01.16- 01.19
Location: SaidpurVillage
Clip 14


"The picture was a painting of - then again it wasn't true"

The perspective is shown: in the water there is a reflection of the child, as it starts to fade away she angrily splashes the water. (Eye level match/ Over the shoulder shot <Low angle shot)
Duration: 01.20- 01.29
Location: Saidpur Village
Clip 15







No lyric




Duration: 01.30 - 01.32
Location: Saidpur Village
Clip 16

"And all this time - Secret to myself"


Close up of the present version; focusing on her speech. (Lip-sync)




Duration: 01.33 - 01.39
Location: SaidpurVillage
Clip 17

"I've been putting sorrow on the farest place on my shelf"

She is standing on the edge and the camera spins around her.

Duration:01.40 - 01.45
Location:
Clip 18

No lyrics





merge clip 17

Duration: 01.45 - 01.48
Location:
Clip 19

" And I was running far away Would I run off the world someday?"

Cut scenes from previous shots (running through woods)
Additions of Mid-close up of subject lip syncing

Duration: 01.49 - 01.53
Location:
Clip 20

Nobody knows, nobody knows

Monotonous cuts of subjects’ close up singing to subject running

Duration: 01.53 - 01.57
Location:
Clip 21

And I was dancing in the rain TILL I can't complain

Subject being circled in   various places- tracking   and panning our subject-






Duration: 01.58 - 02.01
Location:
Clip 22

But now take me home
Take me home where I belong

Close up of subject- capture emotional contact- lip syncing
-Dolly in & Dolly out





Duration: 02.02- - 02.07
Location: f9 park
Clip 23

I got no other place to go


merge clip 22








Duration: 02.07 - 02.09
Location: F9 park
Clip 24

Now take me home to TILL place to go


(Lip- Sync)
Mid shot of subject sitting on a double swing set > turns to look at the other swing (track subjects movements and eye perspective)


Duration: 02.10 - 02.15
Location: F9 park
Clip 25

Repetition of the previous lines

Front Mid shot of child > Dolly out to wide shot showing the subject child run towards older woman> Mid shot of older woman picking up the child in her arms.






Duration: 02.16 - 02.24
location: F9park
Clip 26

I can't take it anymore

Wide angles of The location shown in previous shot now vacant> shifts to close up of major subject lip syncing










Duration: 02.25 - 02. 28
location: F9 park
Clip 27

But I kept running for a soft place to fall (4 TIMES)


Subject running in a vacant construction site> wide shot shifts to subjects perspective> Runs to a door> struggles with the door> door opens up to subject looking (over the shoulder shot) at her own-self tied up in chains.

Duration: 02.29 - 03.04
location: E/11
Clip 28

And I was running far away Would I run off the world someday?


reverse shots from
44 - 43 - 42










Duration: 03.05 - 03.08
Clip 29




But now take me home Take me home where I belong

30 - 26 - 25 - 24 - 23



Duration: 03.08 - 03.13
Clip 30




I got no other place to go



16-15-14-13


Duration: 03.14 - 03.16
Clip 31




Now take me home TILL Other place to go


9-8-7-6


Duration: 03.17 - 03.24
Clip 32




Now take me home, home where I belong (4 TIMES)


5-4-2-1


Duration: 03.25 - 03.56
Clip 33




I can't take it anymore

Extreme closeup of subjects' eyes > dolly out to show a wide shot of subject chained inside the dark room.

Duration: 03.57 - 04.00
Clip 34




No lyrics


Merge clip 33 and fade out


Duration: 04.00 - 04.09

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